literature

Fallen

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Literature Text

Lost in these paths of illusions
Hurting, all alone im falling
Nothing matters to me anymore
You are the only thing that i adore
Let me fall into your arms and die
Im soaring through the heavens
Wishing i could fly..
Away from all the pain, That stabs at me on the inside
My wishes, My Dreams, My Memories are all denied
So just paint your face in my fallen memories
Bury yourself with all my tragedies
Can you feel the hatred, Can you feel the way i do?
Look me in my dead eyes and say you care
Then reach into my cold chest, Grasp my heard, Tear it out and strip it bare
Im falling further down, this spiral of self hate
Trying so hard, To escape this fate...
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© 2005 - 2024 captain-archdandy
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Gnd-Zer0's avatar
Wow, quite the poem there:

I like how you start the poem... "lost in these paths of illusions.." a powerful statement and a nice choice.
It can be really hard to escape self hate ... shesh .. i know how that feels... at least my interpretation of the feeling sucks. I know its diffrent for everyone going through that self hate. I hope this poem reaches other people who have felt the same feelings.